4 thoughts on “First Draft: From A Winter Walk

  1. Pingback: First Draft: From A Winter Walk | City Jackdaw

  2. [from my poetry blog. I don’t like the last lines, but as the title of the post says-it’s just a quick first draft.] Agreed. Last two lines are -meh-. But I know you’ll figure out the poetic ending…
    For myself it feels like “when the wind haunts the eaves and the shadows flee” that the winter walk is calling the walker back to itself somehow…

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